Rhythm

 Morn's rhythm band orchestrated
Those sounds combined by whom
Perfect harmony echoes softly
In a fog drenched wet doom 

The music lifts a spirit entombed
Sets it high up above
Listen to the roosters' chorus
Cooing of a mourning dove

Fancy, fancy, fancy sing-song
Of a Mockingbird's beek
Cheer-up, cheer-up song birds tune sweet
But stillness in the seeks

An answer to life's heavy questions
Why does man others hurt
Putting down our fellowman
Quick in passing and curt



Unfinished
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 6/15/2017 3:33:00 PM
this is lovely, with such a strong message at the end
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Date: 6/14/2017 5:28:00 AM
- A beautiful way to meet the day, Sara - A wonderful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 12:39:00 PM
Wonderful write, Sara, here lately I have been hearing the birds singing day and night outside my window in the oak tree and shrubs so they have been very loud.. Your poem sings just like those birds, " beautifully". Yes, there has to be some kind of peace in this world like the birds songs...
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Date: 6/13/2017 3:17:00 PM
Thanks for the nice review..I am glad that you are enjoying the sound of the birds..They are enjoying spring, rearing their young, and the large crop of insects..There can be peace if only within in this day of uncertainty..Sara
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