Rhythm

Rhythm of typing
Interrupted
Then stopped
By the sound of acorns
As they hit the roof
   

Gogyohka(I don't know if correct)

lifenaturetanka

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Harry Horsman

October 26, 2012 at 10:49 AM

told as it is, does not get much better than this,,,, SAara

Vesna Kovrlija

October 25, 2012 at 12:14 PM

Descriptive and amazing.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

October 24, 2012 at 7:02 PM

Love this image and its brevity!! Jag

Andrea Dietrich

October 24, 2012 at 4:13 PM

there you go again, amazing me!!

Russell Sivey

October 24, 2012 at 10:38 AM

This is a very visual, and audio centric write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and pleasant write this afternoon! What a beautifully written masterful piece, Great Work!!

Ilene Bauer

October 24, 2012 at 10:21 AM

great title and ending. i like this one very much! (i think you have a typo in "typing," though, unless that's intentional because of being interrupted.)