Rhythm

Rhythm of typing Interrupted Then stopped By the sound of acorns As they hit the roof Gogyohka(I don't know if correct)

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/26/2012 10:49:00 AM

told as it is, does not get much better than this,,,, SAara

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/25/2012 12:14:00 PM

Descriptive and amazing.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/24/2012 7:02:00 PM

Love this image and its brevity!! Jag

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 4:13:00 PM

there you go again, amazing me!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/24/2012 10:38:00 AM

This is a very visual, and audio centric write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and pleasant write this afternoon! What a beautifully written masterful piece, Great Work!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/24/2012 10:21:00 AM

great title and ending. i like this one very much! (i think you have a typo in "typing," though, unless that's intentional because of being interrupted.)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/24/2012 9:26:00 AM

yes, sara.. you did it!...so imaginative with an ending that delights.. winner for me!..:) huggs