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Sat under Sun,thinking,What to write..
Fat Singer ''Bun'',singing,''Cut the shoe White''...
Rat-Seller gone,saying,''Shut the Zoo at Night''
Everybody busy,keeping it all nice and tight..
But here i'm,still thinking,what to write!

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Robert Lindley Date: 7/17/2014 8:37:00 AM Congrats on your win!! A suggestion, open up and write what is in your heart. Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 7/18/2014 2:23:00 AM Thank you very much! :)

John Pen Date: 4/23/2014 10:45:00 AM Hilarious Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 5/15/2014 11:39:00 PM LOL :p

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/20/2014 1:03:00 AM Hello, Saba , congratulations......awesome win....pd Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 4/21/2014 12:54:00 AM :) Thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/19/2014 11:35:00 AM Hahaha cute also..:) when writing something with a theme it's really harder you need to thing for quite sometime to get it on:) Congratulations :), olive eloisa Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 4/21/2014 12:55:00 AM yep right ;) thanku :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/19/2014 11:00:00 AM Dear Saba, Sometimes it does take along time to get the inspiration. What a fun contest this was! Congratulations on your win. Love and blessings for a happy Easter weekend, Carolyn Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 4/21/2014 12:55:00 AM thankss a zill :) Happy Easter!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/19/2014 1:49:00 AM Saba a beautiful poem worth great win,,, congrats ! Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 4/21/2014 12:56:00 AM thakns :)

Verlena S. Walker Date: 4/18/2014 7:50:00 PM Nice win Saba.... Congratulations... Verlena Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 4/21/2014 12:56:00 AM thanks ;)

Tim Smith Date: 4/18/2014 6:23:00 PM Beautiful write Saba....Congratulations Tim Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 4/21/2014 12:57:00 AM thanks :)

Paul Callus Date: 4/18/2014 3:54:00 PM You don't have to stay there thinking....you got an honourable mention...which also counts as a win. congratulations :) // paul Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 4/21/2014 12:57:00 AM haha yes! thanks :)