Saba Khan Poet Rhyme

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Sat under Sun,thinking,What to write..
Fat Singer ''Bun'',singing,''Cut the shoe White''...
Rat-Seller gone,saying,''Shut the Zoo at Night''
Everybody busy,keeping it all nice and tight..
But here i'm,still thinking,what to write!

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Robert Lindley July 17, 2014 at 8:37 AM Congrats on your win!! A suggestion, open up and write what is in your heart. Saba Khan July 18, 2014 at 2:23 AM Thank you very much! :)

John Pen April 23, 2014 at 10:45 AM Hilarious Saba Khan May 15, 2014 at 11:39 PM LOL :p

Poet Destroyer A April 20, 2014 at 1:03 AM Hello, Saba , congratulations......awesome win....pd Saba Khan April 21, 2014 at 12:54 AM :) Thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 19, 2014 at 11:35 AM Hahaha cute also..:) when writing something with a theme it's really harder you need to thing for quite sometime to get it on:) Congratulations :), olive eloisa Saba Khan April 21, 2014 at 12:55 AM yep right ;) thanku :)

Carolyn Devonshire April 19, 2014 at 11:00 AM Dear Saba, Sometimes it does take along time to get the inspiration. What a fun contest this was! Congratulations on your win. Love and blessings for a happy Easter weekend, Carolyn Saba Khan April 21, 2014 at 12:55 AM thankss a zill :) Happy Easter!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 19, 2014 at 1:49 AM Saba a beautiful poem worth great win,,, congrats ! Saba Khan April 21, 2014 at 12:56 AM thakns :)

Verlena S. Walker April 18, 2014 at 7:50 PM Nice win Saba.... Congratulations... Verlena Saba Khan April 21, 2014 at 12:56 AM thanks ;)

Tim Smith April 18, 2014 at 6:23 PM Beautiful write Saba....Congratulations Tim Saba Khan April 21, 2014 at 12:57 AM thanks :)

Paul Callus April 18, 2014 at 3:54 PM You don't have to stay there thinking....you got an honourable mention...which also counts as a win. congratulations :) // paul Saba Khan April 21, 2014 at 12:57 AM haha yes! thanks :)