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Rhyme Time Contest

Glass shoes Petticoats Leather Jackets Cherry Cokes Sandra Dee Bobby too Pat Boone Kalamazoo Hair teased Jitter bug petticoats cut rug Virgin here Virgin there Real love Everywhere Nifty 50's Brando hula hoop gotta go!

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Gary Bateman

Date: 6/2/2015 2:13:00 PM

Judy, What a very neat Rhyme here. Brando and Hula Hoop, huh?? This is a great write indeed!! Best Always, Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 5/29/2015 3:02:00 PM

what a fun rhyme Judy i could imagine this set to music - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/28/2015 9:07:00 AM

I adored this piece. You caputured the readers heart and took us back to a great era. Nice job! I'm glad I stopped by today.Thanks for visiting my page you are welcome anytime:) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2015 10:48:00 PM

hey, Judy, I have a 50's poem that is a little bit like this one. that was such a fun era!! well from what i hear. hahaha (I was just a babe in those days!)