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Rheumatoid Fingers

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Collom Lune
Lunes are haiku-like forms designed for English- American poets…  the Collum Lune with 3 lines :  the content has 3 WORDS for the first line, 5 WORDS for the second line, and 3 WORDS for the last one , thus,  3/5/3 …

sorting through memories of concerts and piano recitals rheumatoid fingers tickle broken forgotten keys inlaid with the laughter of ebony and ivory (Collom Lune) 05/11/2020 FLOW WITH THE COLLUM LUNE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2020 6:55:00 PM
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Emile, back to say congratulations again for your win in nette's contest, great poem _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/14/2020 9:42:00 AM
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Thanks again Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2020 6:48:00 PM
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Emile, excellent, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/14/2020 9:41:00 AM
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Thanks Constance, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/13/2020 12:12:00 PM
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"inlaid with the laughter of ebony and ivory"...what a beautiful thought of imbibing the spirit of the keys :) Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/14/2020 9:41:00 AM
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Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/11/2020 7:58:00 PM
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wow, you really used this form WELL, Emile. Wish mine were as poetic as this one. Thanks for my placement in your contest too, btw
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/11/2020 9:54:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea, I appropriate it my friend, Emile.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/11/2020 10:38:00 AM
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And this one has some depth to it and a magnificent hidden visual, Excellent job Emille
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/11/2020 12:49:00 PM
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Thanks John, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.

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