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Rhapsody of Love

She is not a pretty girl in her mind,
spends most of her time looking at the ground;
but in dreams with love she is entwined,
with a dreamworld man she is quite spellbound.

She cannot wait for darkness to fall,
and she will lay in his strong arms breathless;
his whispering words and kisses-  enthrall,
and her lust for him is bold and boundless.

In her attire she is changing each day,
to a style sensual and ethereal;
one day a man offers her a rose bouquet,
when they kiss she is both forceful and fragile.

Their ecstasy leaves him with sweet longing,
he wants her forever in his arms;
so happy ever after is their loving . . . .
but often, her night dream teacher still charms.

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September 30, 2017

Rhyme/Rhapsody Of Love
Copyright Protected, ID 945846


Written for the contest, Love For Movie Screen
sponsor, Silent One

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:47 AM
Beautifully romantic poem, BW, and so well crafted - loved it! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your win with this lovely, dreamy and beautifully written romantic poem.
Walker Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Broken Wings, a romantic poem of the century. Congratulations on your Placement. ~ Sonia
Roper Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings!
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:18 AM
Congrats BW on your well deserved win!
One Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Simply beautiful.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Sergi Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 11:51 AM
The dreams of ecstasy done so wellGreat Write!
Warrior Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Popcorn please...and some tissue lol...god bless & best of luck...^WW^
Gentile Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Lovely and Beautiful, Broken Wings and apparently, her dreams came true which is so nice to think about! xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 9:49 PM
A lovely fantasy :)
Ashley Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 9:46 PM
A beautifully written fantasy Broken Wings with such lovely lines and imagery throughout, especially your second stanza. Good luck in the contest.
Sharma Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Hi its nice one ,
May Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:08 PM
A lovely and enchanting write BW..
Pandit Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:01 PM
A dreamy girl finds her charming prince--a nice theme that has a happy ending--except for the night dream teacher--best for win BW!
Gupta Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 10:30 AM
So much said in so brief ... in dream-delight breaking free from grief ...
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