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She is not a pretty girl in her mind, spends most of her time looking at the ground; but in dreams with love she is entwined, with a dreamworld man she is quite spellbound. She cannot wait for darkness to fall, and she will lay in his strong arms breathless; his whispering words and kisses- enthrall, and her lust for him is bold and boundless. In her attire she is changing each day, to a style sensual and ethereal; one day a man offers her a rose bouquet, when they kiss she is both forceful and fragile. Their ecstasy leaves him with sweet longing, he wants her forever in his arms; so happy ever after is their loving . . . . but often, her night dream teacher still charms. ______________________ September 30, 2017 Rhyme/Rhapsody Of Love Copyright Protected, ID 945846 Written for the contest, Love For Movie Screen sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 10/5/2017 7:47:00 AM
Beautifully romantic poem, BW, and so well crafted - loved it! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lovely.
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Date: 10/4/2017 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your win with this lovely, dreamy and beautifully written romantic poem.
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:26:00 PM
Broken Wings, a romantic poem of the century. Congratulations on your Placement. ~ Sonia
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings!
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:18:00 AM
Congrats BW on your well deserved win!
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:00:00 AM
Simply beautiful.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/1/2017 11:51:00 AM
The dreams of ecstasy done so wellGreat Write!
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Date: 10/1/2017 9:33:00 AM
Popcorn please...and some tissue lol...god bless & best of luck...^WW^
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Date: 10/1/2017 7:05:00 AM
Lovely and Beautiful, Broken Wings and apparently, her dreams came true which is so nice to think about! xxoo
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Date: 9/30/2017 9:49:00 PM
A lovely fantasy :)
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Date: 9/30/2017 9:46:00 PM
A beautifully written fantasy Broken Wings with such lovely lines and imagery throughout, especially your second stanza. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/30/2017 9:14:00 PM
Hi its nice one ,
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Date: 9/30/2017 8:08:00 PM
A lovely and enchanting write BW..
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Date: 9/30/2017 12:01:00 PM
A dreamy girl finds her charming prince--a nice theme that has a happy ending--except for the night dream teacher--best for win BW!
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Date: 9/30/2017 10:30:00 AM
So much said in so brief ... in dream-delight breaking free from grief ...
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