Rhapsody In Three

On the day they united
The first song was born
The moon ceased it’s orbit
They took Earth by storm
 
Oh perfect endeavor
They designed second song
Terribly clever
Yet sweet and so strong
 
With piano and voice
With word and with pen
They made it happen
Again and again
 
Fire, subtle and fleeting
Quenched before it could start
A ballad so lovely
Twas’ the sound of a heart
 
Somehow the magic
Began to subside
It became more illusive
The harder they tried
 
So broken as they tore apart
She left behind her soul
Consumed by an aching heart
Just waiting to grow old
 
She looked ‘cross the courtyard
Her hands clenched up tight
As a familiar face
Appeared in the light
 
Time stood still with memories
From over the years
Back came the laughter
The pain and the fears
 
I don’t want to fall, she said
Therefore I will not fly
Take me with chains
To the land of goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rhinem Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Ps., Tis A Beautiful Title: Rhapsody In Three *:*(*
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January 30, 2014 at 9:57 AM
† Listening Unto The Goo Goo Dolls, City Of Angels, Aka, Iris, Sweet Beautiful Ellie ˜ 'I Just Want You To Know Who I Am.' *.* A Very Eloquent As Beautiful Painting We Find, By An Extremely Beautiful Woman: Her 'Creation.' ˜ We've Got The Keys Baby Girl! There Is No Goodbye In HIS Land Of The Living....Welcome To Her Loving's PoetrySoup ˜ My Love, Always, John
Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 6:59 PM
Very sweet write. I'm expecting more from you.
Torres Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Hi Ellie ..Welcome to Poetry Soup!!!..you made an awesome poem ,dear... I hope you enjoy the great experience as you go beyond writing poems...i'm sure you'll love the people here..they are so kind and very supportive...Good luck to your journey in poetry world!!! ..always..AiyaH :0)
King Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 4:42 PM
Everyone is amazing so far, thanks for your feedback hun! -E
A  Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Hi Ellie, wow... The imagery's amazing. The sound enlightens a good feeling, even though she doesn't want to fall..... Hello, my new poet friend, I want to thank you for accepting my friendship, ha-ha now you'll never be rid of me, :) Can't wait to read a new one from you tomorrow... SKAT
King Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 4:41 PM
This works for me! ;)
Revolution Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Very Sweet! -R.R.
King Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Thanks so much! :)
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