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Rewriting One's Life

Stern and forgotten Able people started Placing together the world In the way we wanted Never showing fault Earnestly following Many hearts within peace Open ended love Given freely in life How do others react To the history they’ve created Do we smile in our past Or are we ashamed Please do not corrupt May we bring together Only the good in life And leave behind Everything else undesired Russell Sivey Entrant into Tracie's "Everyone knows, anything goes..." contest

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Date: 10/24/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:56:00 PM
Congrats Russell on a super fantastic win luv with this elegant poetry .. have missed u and so happy PS is running smoothly once again luv..
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Date: 10/22/2011 1:19:00 PM
Congrats, Russ. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fine write Russell
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Date: 10/16/2011 12:25:00 AM
Let's forget the past but remember the lessons it taught us! Aall the best in the contest Russ! :)
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Date: 10/15/2011 11:56:00 PM
thought provoking, russell... your introspective tone insoires me... lovely! :)huggs, nette
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Date: 10/15/2011 10:52:00 PM
Moving forward is the only way to go. Learning from the past, both the good and the bad. Thank you for sharing Russell...cheers Margaret
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