Rewrite Me As..

As lovely geisha
That can stop any man
With just one look
And is taught to move
To and fro
With fans n clogs
For all to say ah
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 12:52 PM
An upbeat, entertaining poem, Leah!
Townsend Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 11:25 AM
Enchanting. This is a really nice write. It is filled with a sadness though. I see that the subject is unhappy with the life that they have. If this is a reality for you I have this to say... So much beauty lies within the soul of this writer. The gift of beautiful words are enough to capture the heart of any man and therefore your beauty is shining like a beacon leading love and magic your way. True beauty of the soul is beauty beyond compare. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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March 28, 2009 at 9:44 AM
Nice write...With just one look, to stop any man, boy that would be something..Keep writing and sharing..GB Always Tyesha
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