Rewrite Me
Sleepy- learning more each minute.
Breathing- trying hard till I quit it.
Blinking- seeing if i truly see that.
Thinking- is all I ever need and
Luck, love, living, loss and if I -
show you who I am,
Will you show who you will be?
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