Rewind the Ravel

Goodbye, I'm about ready to call it a day
I'm no longer in love, although, I love you still
My screams silence when you ignore what I say
Refusing to give up, I turn myself in at will

Planned memories imagined possible
Another seed will surely help us grow
Smiling through sorrow is becoming impossible
Trying to fill voided love with dreams of tomorrow

A blessing connecting us deeper than ever
Passion explored deeply, outweighs the boring
Time shared with quality, ignites dreams of forever
First kisses flutter and send sensations soaring 

Eyes locking, cheeks blushing, smiles erupt
Spotted from a far, I claim you as mine
Searching and hoping, feeling like time is up
Freely living with fantasies of love on my mind

Ravel fast forward

Freely living with fantasies of love on my mind
Searching and hoping, feeling like time is up
Spotted from a far, I claim you as mine
Eyes locking, cheeks blushing, smiles erupt

First kisses flutter and send sensations soaring
Time shared with quality, ignites dreams of forever
Passion explored deeply, outweighs the boring
A blessing connecting us deeper than ever

Trying to fill voided love with dreams of tomorrow
Smiling through sorrow is becoming impossible
Another seed will surely help us grow
Planned memories imagined possible

Refusing to give up, I turn myself in at will
My screams silence when you ignore what I say
I'm not longer in love, although, I still love you
Goodbye, I'm about ready to call it a day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/23/2009 9:25:00 AM
Excellent Sunday morning poetry reading Angela. Thank you for sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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