Rewarding Walk

Today’s walk started a little earlier than usual 
With the welcoming of gorgeous cottony clouds’ dancing splendor 
Their shining was charmed by sun’s golden-reddish glitter
Dazzled me showing their astonishing shapes and colors

Saw a big flock of turkeys appreciating silence of the morning hour
Looking for tasty treats while happily chatting among each other
After sensing Reva they responded by clucking bustles
Becoming uncomfortable started running in various directions

A dog was roaming in the back yard of a house right at the turn
Charged toward Reva thankfully through the fence’s bars of iron 
Showing her annoyance she challenged him by standing right in the front
Pulling her back was a hefty encounter I had to tackle 

Our walk furthered in a calm shush
Observing the transformed colors of some tree leaves’ prominent standards
Shades of green were changing into amazing reddish-pink patterns
Showing a start of upcoming fall’s enchanting flavor

We kept enjoying our walk cherishing every moment
Abruptly Reva got attracted to a familiar smell
She pulled on the leash and went down a slant in bushes 
Holding a tennis ball in her mouth came back up happily wiggling her tail

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/14/2019 1:36:00 PM
Smita, what a delightfully rewarding walk! Autumn is near, my favorite season of the year. Thank you for sharing your experience with us. And be sure to give Reva a treat :) ~Mark
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Date: 9/14/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Mark! Reva got her treat as soon as we came home :)
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