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Revolution of Stars

salt and salt assault, their wrists can’t resist the attack — the zip... their skates... sizzle! 5/5/2021 Original free verse: The Cutting Edge Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 5/20/2021 12:25:00 PM

Was a figure skater in my youth and loved it. It was as close to flying as I can imagine. / Maurice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/5/2021 7:05:00 AM

I love ice skating. A great extract from your original poem. Hugs.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/5/2021 5:26:00 AM

Wonderful entry. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2021 5:55:00 AM

Thank you! You too!

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/5/2021 5:15:00 AM

Could be nothing else but a pair of ice skaters. Am I correct? Good luck, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2021 5:55:00 AM

You’re right!