Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Revolution of Stars

salt and salt assault,
their wrists can’t resist
the attack — the zip...
their skates... sizzle!

5/5/2021
Original free verse: The Cutting Edge
Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Maurice Rigoler May 20, 2021 at 12:25 PM Was a figure skater in my youth and loved it. It was as close to flying as I can imagine. / Maurice

Victor Buhagiar May 5, 2021 at 7:05 AM I love ice skating. A great extract from your original poem. Hugs.

Regina Mcintosh May 5, 2021 at 5:26 AM Wonderful entry. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2021 at 5:55 AM Thank you! You too!

Daniel Turner May 5, 2021 at 5:15 AM Could be nothing else but a pair of ice skaters. Am I correct? Good luck, Kim. Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2021 at 5:55 AM You’re right!