Get Your Premium Membership

Revived

July 23, 2005 - Saturday revived Current mood: peaceful Drowning in quicksand, i reach out but no one can give a hand I scream loud but the sound becomes muzzled, the crowd gathers but they just seem puzzled, i try to shout help but it is like i am in a bad dream and just can not be seen. i am going under fast i close my eyes and draw one last breath, i wander is this how i meet my death. it is dark now, suddenly i feel something pulling at me struggling i think it is trying to set me free then i hear a voice crying not yet you don't, i can't see still but the background noise is starting to come in clear, i feel you standing there your words echo don't go, no don't you dare. L.D.V

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.


Book: Shattered Sighs