Revived
July 23, 2005 - Saturday
revived
Current mood: peaceful
Drowning in quicksand, i reach out but no one can give a hand I scream loud but
the sound becomes muzzled, the crowd gathers but they just seem puzzled, i try
to shout help but it is like i am in a bad dream and just can not be seen. i am
going under fast i close my eyes and draw one last breath, i wander is this how i
meet my death. it is dark now, suddenly i feel something pulling at me struggling
i think it is trying to set me free then i hear a voice crying not yet you don't, i can't
see still but the background noise is starting to come in clear, i feel you standing
there your words echo don't go, no don't you dare.
L.D.V
Copyright © Lacey Vann | Year Posted 2007
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