Revived
' A weakened mind, when stilled the heart
A lifeless mass, not yet to start
To one day beat, a pounding drum
For victor’s dance, with love it’s won
Resounding percussion left to hear
Upon an arrival of love, sincere
T’is then is when my heart shall beat
As heart takes life, it’s then complete
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