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Revived

snow
        and ice
    howling winds 
 buried under drifts
         chilled  

         spring
        sun light
     soft breezes
  life's pulse revived
         thawed 


     March 04, 2019
 "Light up the Page" Contest  
   Sponsor: Joseph May

Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2019

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P.S. Awtry Date: 3/6/2019 12:39:00 PM great pairing! an elegant write :) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 3/6/2019 12:59:00 PM Thank you so much! ~ Gershon

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/5/2019 7:13:00 AM Love how you've shown the winters passing to springs arrival. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 3/6/2019 12:58:00 PM Both (winter's passing and spring's arrival) are, indeed, worthy of love! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/5/2019 3:58:00 AM "life's pulse revived" - a wow line for sure in a sweet poem that I hope helps bring forth spring! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 3/6/2019 11:17:00 AM Thanks. Spring can sure use your help, Caren. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/4/2019 10:51:00 PM I can feel how much you're longing for spring with this evocative write, should do well in the contest! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 3/6/2019 11:17:00 AM Yup, you're right: I'm longing for Spring, but Spring apparently isn't coming for a long time. So maybe I should be 'shorting' for Spring, and then it'll come shortly. LOL. Who knows? Whatever works... ~ gw

Line Gauthier Date: 3/4/2019 8:41:00 PM Bravo, Gershon. Good one! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 3/4/2019 8:51:00 PM Thank you so much, Line. Appreciated. ~ Gershon

Alexis Y. Date: 3/4/2019 8:28:00 PM WoW! Gershon, Your poetry continues to wow me. Great poem on one season changing to next. Good imagery as well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 3/4/2019 8:51:00 PM Alexis, I've just realized what I should do. I should ask Poetry Soup to let you judge all the contests. Ha, ha: I'd win a bunch of them then (perhaps)… LOL.... Thank you so much for your kind words, your encouragement and support. Best wishes, Gershon