Gershon Wolf Poet Lanterne

Revived

snow
        and ice
    howling winds 
 buried under drifts
         chilled  

         spring
        sun light
     soft breezes
  life's pulse revived
         thawed 


     March 04, 2019
 "Light up the Page" Contest  
   Sponsor: Joseph May

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P.S. Awtry March 6, 2019 at 12:39 PM great pairing! an elegant write :) Gershon Wolf March 6, 2019 at 12:59 PM Thank you so much! ~ Gershon

Tom Cunningham March 5, 2019 at 7:13 AM Love how you've shown the winters passing to springs arrival. Good luck. Tom. Gershon Wolf March 6, 2019 at 12:58 PM Both (winter's passing and spring's arrival) are, indeed, worthy of love! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger March 5, 2019 at 3:58 AM "life's pulse revived" - a wow line for sure in a sweet poem that I hope helps bring forth spring! Gershon Wolf March 6, 2019 at 11:17 AM Thanks. Spring can sure use your help, Caren. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner March 4, 2019 at 10:51 PM I can feel how much you're longing for spring with this evocative write, should do well in the contest! Gershon Wolf March 6, 2019 at 11:17 AM Yup, you're right: I'm longing for Spring, but Spring apparently isn't coming for a long time. So maybe I should be 'shorting' for Spring, and then it'll come shortly. LOL. Who knows? Whatever works... ~ gw

Line Gauthier March 4, 2019 at 8:41 PM Bravo, Gershon. Good one! Gershon Wolf March 4, 2019 at 8:51 PM Thank you so much, Line. Appreciated. ~ Gershon

Alexis Y. March 4, 2019 at 8:28 PM WoW! Gershon, Your poetry continues to wow me. Great poem on one season changing to next. Good imagery as well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest Gershon Wolf March 4, 2019 at 8:51 PM Alexis, I've just realized what I should do. I should ask Poetry Soup to let you judge all the contests. Ha, ha: I'd win a bunch of them then (perhaps)… LOL.... Thank you so much for your kind words, your encouragement and support. Best wishes, Gershon