Revitalizing Aging Senses

Revitalizing Aging Senses



                           Myopia dispels the reality of biblical Eden

                           evident in the eyes of those skeptical

                           Paradise seen as mere endowment and a

                           sacrificial lamb in one perverted ritual


                           Bare naked deceptions a captivating ploy

                           induce flesh to breed lies and distrust

                           Gold addiction and the passion for poison

                           erode morality like blood-stained dust


                           Truth unlocks sacred doors digging deeper

                           with fortitude unveiling dark unknowns

                           While humanity with glazed gazes ponders

                           rational minds abandon primeval bones












Penned: 03/26/2022
             11:08 a.m.
             Lake Worth
             Florida USA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 4/27/2022 12:17:00 AM
A brilliant analogy of your subjective view, Anselmo. Blessings xxoo
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 4/27/2022 1:55:00 PM
Thanks so much for a meaningful remark and your visit!...ab
Date: 4/26/2022 11:06:00 PM
People are unfortunately growing more and more skeptical about certain beliefs and truths! As you feel we urgently need a revitalizing, Anselmo !
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 4/27/2022 1:58:00 PM
Revitalization, reevaluation and a positive outlook for the future are good things for humanity to endeavor for. Thanks as always for your wisdom Valsa!...ab
Date: 4/24/2022 3:21:00 PM
Quite a yelp for help here, Anselmo!
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 4/24/2022 7:13:00 PM
I'd say. SOS in big letters!...ab
Date: 4/19/2022 1:19:00 AM
I suppose only God can revitalize our despondent souls.
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 4/19/2022 1:27:00 PM
You have a very thoughtful insight. Thanks always for your visit and sharing your perspective Victor...
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