Revitalized Love In the Fall of Winter

In the midst of vacant hours, echoes of expressions on opposite ends
are something of the same. Ruminating on questions; questions about
thy and questions about thou intertwined
with the then and the now. Thoughts
prelude to other thoughts of 
thoughts emerging to 
many thoughts.
Consulting and
considering 
the death
and birth
of us; is thy
disinclined 
to shed the 
events upon the
ground transformed
from a dream out of a
dream to this dream only of us?
A coherent argument it is, that the
memories back on yesterday brought us 
here today...But, when thy and thou bodies
meet and descend upon each accreting to the singular; occupancy
quickly overcomes vacancy leading the thoughts of many thoughts effaced.
(Sigh)...Thy and Thou love bolsters all the more today than back on yesterday.


Pace, G
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12-11-2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sietesantos Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Another wonderful gem from your pen! Kindest regards.
Duncan Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 2:35 AM
very well done on this free verse ,,,,, I thank you for reading my Pitch Perfect Dreams. you have a great day ;}
Konos Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 6:17 PM
WOW.............A coherent argument it is, that the memories back on yesterday brought us here today.........That line alone tells an entire story........
Guzzi Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 2:09 PM
I enjoyed your verse this afternoon. Light & Love
Sanders Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 6:38 AM
Wow excellent metaphoric poem poet. Very good poetry
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Pace, a superb write and very clever, well done...David
Jones Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 11:50 AM
Magnificent
Horsman Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 3:08 PM
wonderful flowing poetry, with meaning..love this Pace...
Britt Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 2:35 PM
This is the bomb I love this! Interesting title and amazing presentation of a satisfactory chapter of romantically pleasant thoughts, memories and outcomes. It feels good reading this and it felt even better to read it again <3
Palmer Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 7:03 AM
keep going Super Ink,great write,love it
Ober Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 11:14 AM
Wow, what a creative piece! I really enjoyed this one.
Cannon Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 6:50 AM
I love the play on words, this piece just rolls off the tongue! and I love the title, Good piece! -Beastboy
O'Driscoll Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 3:04 PM
Very wonderful write, love Elizabeth
A A Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Simply beautiful. The best poems are ones that take you to a next place in your mind. Yours did that for me.
A  Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 10:59 AM
Love this poem...skat
Goff Avatar
December 28, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Every day we honor our heritage by our actions...nice, Pace! jimbo
Carrillo Avatar
December 27, 2012 at 5:50 PM
This is a beautiful write with a great flow. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 5:24 PM
Thoughts that are deep can lead to great insights..I hope that you came up with some that answered your questions..I like the idea that God is there when we are knitted together in our mother's womb and that He is in charge of the knitting..Great work that you have penned...Sara
Andresen Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 10:58 AM
A quick visit to your nice poem,Pace,G. - Wishing you a peaceful and happy Christmas! <3 - / / I'm sending you a big Christmas hug!! Anne-Lise :) - / /
A   Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Thank you for the nice comment on my poem.. your poems are still amazing... so impressive. always~pd
K Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Dang G. what a write..you are a truly creative poet! Thank you for sharing :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Nice and cleverly done Pace, awesome xx
Cooper Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Damn this is totally awesome! I could never do something like this. I am stuck in a rut.............. rhyme is my game.
Kearley Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 8:19 PM
Another beaut I must say...Thanks for stopping by,or I would haven't caught this one till who knows when? ha,ha. :o) Pen in hand~Stick to the plan~Words roll out~Like you know they can~~~~~~
Martin Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Very good write I loved the feel it gave mme thank you for sharing your friend Nita
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