Reviled Castaway

A mom tucked in her child one night In bliss he fell asleep Her horror grew at day’s first light She could not help but weep A changeling lay in her son’s place With wings, large hooves and tail She scorned the babe who sought embrace “Lord, curse the troll,” she wailed For in the night a being crept Through her New Jersey home A fiend was left as she had slept A gift from Satan’s gnome Her handsome son, such envy sparked Now resting in a troll’s domain The changeling’s face by Satan marked And love she could not feign This curse she felt was envy pure She could not bear its sight A hateful child she’d not endure Such scorn did he ignite To Mother Leeds this thirteenth child Became a castaway It flew into the pines reviled And to this day seeks prey
*Based on the legend of the New Jersey Devil. Changelings are infants that are replaced overnight by devilish imps from trolls or elves according to Irish legend. Entry for the “Creepy Irish Creatures” contest.
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Lane Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Well written Carolyn. Congratulations. Tony
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October 27, 2011 at 4:11 PM
A great tale and win Carolyn. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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October 27, 2011 at 9:28 AM
As I said before Carolyn beautifully written. Congratulations on your well deserved "3ard" place, Agape, Moses
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October 27, 2011 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Creepy Irish Creatures" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2011 at 9:51 PM
Congratulations Carolyn. A creepy story for sure... well done ..Margaret
Guzzi Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 5:31 PM
Nice way to bring the pasts..creepies to the present! And just before halloween too! big congrad's light & love
Freeman Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Soup mail.
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October 6, 2011 at 10:18 PM
beautifully written Carolyn, I think I saw a movie based on this, best of wishes to your health and contest, dear one. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 8:22 PM
ahh yes Carolyn i liked the extra input!!! Light & Love
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October 1, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Love this one, Carolyn. I think you mentioned the NJ devil to me before
Maverick Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:09 PM
A well worked poem and interesting to read Carolyn, i hope to see this one up top in the contest..
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Oooh this is a good one, Carolyn. Creepy, scary and perfect for the contest. It's a rainy day here but I'm loving it just the same! Love, Audrey
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October 1, 2011 at 9:13 AM
very good.. good luck in the contest. cory
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