Review of Systems
Any pain or tenderness?
Yeah, on the left side of my chest
What makes it better or worse?
It feels better when I withhold, it hurts worse when I love
Have you tried anything for the pain?
No, I’m yet to find a remedy
When did it first begin?
When I met him
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