Review

Review your love to me 
Just like the plants in its spring boom 
With evergreen love from the blossom
When the falling dew are still pure 

Review the feelings that you have for me 
Just like the ocean wave in its peak 
With surge and mighty sound to its peace 
When the shining sun is still hot 

Review the joy of your heart towards me 
Just like the white snow in the winter 
With strong cold and freezing water
When my boat can still reach your shore

Review the care and my admiration 
Just like your dreams review to you 
With your love as a crown on my head 
When my heart still calls for you 

Review it if you love me 
Say it to me when u sees me
On your knee I am crying 
Crying to be in clover with you on review
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sefunmi Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 4:51 AM
Lovely write!
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