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Reverse Psychology

The reflection in the water of the woman Was not pleasing; even to herself she looked Hard. Frown marks were etched deep; two lacerations Between her black unruly brows. Thin lips clamped together in a downward Arc Showed her disappointment in life; her dissatisfaction. She didn’t want to go on; She didn’t want to go home. Her reflection said “I bet you haven’t got the guts to get in like Ophelia did.” The woman’s eyes narrowed; she actually hated her reflection. She took off her green shawl and lay it neatly on the green grass beside the still pond. The unhappy woman stepped into the pond; She sunk slowly down through her own reflection. She had fallen for her own reverse psychology. And now she is no more.

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Date: 9/27/2024 7:19:00 AM
A fabulous write, Nikki. I enjoyed it very much. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Nikki Ziehl
Date: 9/27/2024 11:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Edward

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