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Aug. 29, 2024    9,24 am

Reverse Psychology

As teacher gets into her class Pupils make incessant noise She asks all to keep quiet and listen But they talk louder, fidgeting extends Does this chaos cry for more patience? She begs them to continue talking To move around, no more learning Tell their parents what they do in a day Just idle, break school rules and play With mouth shut, silences display. Comes a father with her cute daughter Her unceasing melt-down is horrible Sparks in him his last sort of control By crying out loud rolling down the floor She halts to think, “Is dad a complete fool? He says, let’s cry loudly and take turns Cries of two bring thunder for lightning burns Her daughter stops then sobs Father hugs her daughter with love Then ride back home in their pedicab.
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Date: 9/29/2024 12:29:00 AM
This or That, Vol 27 Contest Judged: 9/27/2024 4:29:00 AM Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Place 3 (up to 1-3 and HM multi-w)
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Date: 9/27/2024 7:14:00 AM
Just beautiful, Len. I enjoyed reading this one. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2024 12:18:00 AM
Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 9/8/2024 11:15:00 AM
There’s a subtle irony in the teacher’s demand for silence leading to an environment where chaos is accepted, while the father’s unorthodox method ultimately brings comfort and resolution. The act of crying loudly together can be seen as a symbolic gesture of shared empathy and understanding, breaking down barriers between parent and child. Overall, the poem offers a humorous yet insightful look at how different people handle similar situations, using everyday scenarios to explore deeper themes of patience, control, and emotional connection.
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/21/2024 10:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful comments my dear poet friend SO. God bless you always and your writings
Date: 9/4/2024 1:47:00 AM
Clever dad. How brilliant is this talented soul! You wrote very well! And i love that your poem’s always have this beautiful cadence! Which makes them so catchy and stunning to the soul and mind! The flow and everything of this and how you’ve captured what reverse psychology and the power of it is brilliant! I use that alot because humanbeings are more likely to do the opposite of what they are told to do! Clever poem! I think this will do well! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/8/2024 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading this poem of mine and your encouraging words my dearest poet and friend Ink. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 9/2/2024 12:37:00 PM
I can so relate with you and this amiable write, len...you words sends off a warm, eloquent vibe! huggs
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/8/2024 9:26:00 AM
Thank you belatedly for reading my poem my dearest poet friend Nette. Sorry for coming only now. Rush hours for exam again and big preparation for a big activity. Hope you're doing well always. Thanks for your uplifting words too. Sending lots of hugs from me to you. God bless you always and your writings.
Date: 8/29/2024 5:08:00 PM
Dear Len, my inspiring poet friend, your expressive and vivid poem skillfully depicts scenarios where reverse psychology can bring calm to chaotic situations with unruly children. Splendid dramatic verse! Your poetry is always special. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/30/2024 9:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful/ and uplifting comment my dear poet friend Susan. Warmest wishes too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/29/2024 11:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. It can work. Fun Ending... Hugs...  Have a great day writing away.................
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/30/2024 9:15:00 PM
Yes it can work most of the time dearest friend. Thank you so much for reading and your uplifting words. Have a great day too. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 8/29/2024 8:57:00 AM
Dear Len, I love reverse psychology and how often it actually works. I have clients in my counseling that I have to do reverse psychology in order to see change. Well Inked. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/30/2024 9:14:00 PM
Thanks a lot for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Danie. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/28/2024 7:54:00 PM
it works. nice interpretation dear poet.
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/30/2024 9:02:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend. So much appreciated. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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