Reverse Graffiti


     The Light, through the veil, paints secrets. 
The crossroads of constellations twisting into new patterns. 
In reverence, the Moon dances, coaxing the Sun, your loyal companion. 
     Your lies bloom, Enchantress... watch!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Miller Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 3:19 AM
Oh yes! This is an excellent erasure of words to leave this wonderful poem, congratulations.
Woods Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 5:16 AM
Tysm!
Puddifoot Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 2:26 PM
i enjoyed reading your poem, an interesting formation of words from the text - congrats on your win in the contest!
Woods Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 5:16 AM
Thank you!
Delaney Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 9:43 AM
I love your version Crystol, and clever how you changed ‘ lies’ from a verb to a noun. Congratulations, SuZ
Woods Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 5:16 AM
Oh good I'm glad I didn't make an error! Thank you so much for an enjoyable and challenging contest!
Richards Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 8:39 PM
I did notice it and it was well within the rules of the contest. In fact, there are a number of homophones in the text provided. I liked the way that you have used capital letters to highlight the personifications . :)
Woods Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Oop... that little mistake might disqualify me actually. The rules stated not to change tenses... not sure if that counts. But ty for your comment!
Bayles Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 7:09 PM
Very nice, Crystol.
Woods Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Tysm Mike!
Rodgers Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Dear Crystol, your entry for the Reverse Graffiti contest is a mesmerizing blend of mystique and artistry. I felt the imagery of light painting secrets through veils and constellations twisting into new patterns evokes a sense of wonder and intrigue. Your poetic expression captures the essence of transformation and the allure of hidden truths. A very captivating piece of creativity. - Blessings, Daniel
Woods Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 9:36 AM
Yay! I was a bit nervous that I didn't understand the assignment or I'd bitten off more than I could chew lol... you've encouraged and uplifted me! To me, entering contests is about the challenge and growth, not winning or losing... and it's a lot of fun! Thank you for your comments and time Daniel.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace