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The Houses Passes a TikTok Ban Bill and approves $95 billion foreign aid for Israel, Ukraine and Taiwan

 

Erasure Poetry from the Text of "Speaker"

Reverse Graffiti NFC 

Reverse Graffiti

The deed is done, much needed        ___a changed mind
                                                                        ___aid Will come
Treason shall take its toll                              ___crime? need not come undone.

                                       __refugees, children of war 
                              
Listen to their screams and let them feast!
Thrown to the wolves, I listen        __Copperhead
			                         __Doughface									__God like
        __God size
                      __snakes eye’s!   
                                  
Women 'dying' to have a baby    ___SOS
Results whatever they may be       
Speaker of the house               ___lackluster
                                                      __it’s Judgement Day!

If I can just change one mind.
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Volumes Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Amazing Anaya. The verses are poignant, and that image is out of this world !
Anaya Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 10:25 PM
Hey SV, thanks. Perfect form for my rants! ;) the text is from Speaker"
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 10:13 PM
I was originally going to use my own text for reverse Graffiti contest but then realized it had to be the text given. I am thinking you purposefully did your own text and this is not for the contest. It looks really cool.
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 12:35 PM
yes, I did it the single line way. Thanks.
Anaya Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 9:42 AM
remember use only one form; EITHER the layout of your choice, OR the single line (a sentence or sentences like prose). N. O. T. both!
Anaya Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 9:18 AM
That is why I'm not entering the contest. I felt creative with this form and perfect for political rants! Thanks, Andrea ~
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 7:58 PM
You picked out some great questions and imagery, Anaya!
Anaya Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 8:07 PM
A plea has gone through! "Aid" yay!
Kalita Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 2:11 AM
This is so magical dear Anaya. The contour of the entire poem is strong enough with the component, each and every syllable is emphasizing the subject. Wish you a blessed day ahead
Anaya Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 9:21 AM
If only I could do more for them and for women! Thank you, sweet Silpika Hugs~Anaya
Empress Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 1:28 AM
Powerful as always dear Anaya, your empathetic mind and soul can be felt through your well woven words! Especially as you mentioned children and so much more, reality we always been seeing for so long! Sadly.youv captured all that very well here. Felt this one! Especially the ending! So strong! Soul hitting! Pleasure always reading your work
Anaya Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 9:28 AM
Thank you, Ink. I have added a few words to help recognize the 'speaker' of the house! He is the one who introduces the bills to the house of representatives before they continue to the senate, very important! Because of him; [[[[ There will be AID to the three Countries mentioned in my "Speaker" this means the children who are starving shall get aid, now! Yay! Ukraine's aid will help them to fight off Russian aggression! Yay! Last but not least Taiwan to defend themselves from Chinese aggression! ]]]]]] ;)
Narain Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 10:18 AM
Great dig at the graffiti. I am glad you found so many ddep and powerful messages in it. Sharp mind.
Anaya Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Thank you so much, Jay!
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 9:06 PM
A powerful message, Anaya.
Anaya Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 10:21 PM
Got it! I find this form perfect for my Political Rants, Suzette
Richards Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 9:11 PM
BTW I think you meant "NFC" (not for contest). It is heartening to see poets using my contests as writing prompts. :)
Anaya Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Suzette. I used both form displays, it's from the text of "Speaker" poem before this. I understand reverse graffiti has nothing to do with spray paint, I couldn't resist!
Juju The Dragon Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 6:50 PM
This Is Just Provokingly Deep, Profound! I Love it, thanks for sharing Your Creative Mind!
Anaya Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 1:38 PM
Thank you, Carlene!
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