Reveries

 
My past is long- over and done, it is just yesterdays sad tears; all my memories kept are things of a past life, the present is a brand new day; a path to beginning, now I live for moments ! This life can be so beautiful, with nature splendid and lovely; and life experiences utterly divine, yet, merciless at times this life; harsh words can be brutal, heartless, cruel- evil ! I have mammoth thoughts in my mind, big ideas swirling around; the world is a vast place with opportunities, yet, I must take just baby steps; for I am inconsequential, a small trivial speck ! I take wisdom from the wise aged, from the old writers and poets; and from my own broken winding journey thus far, but, the new me is different; I am working on unique, for a fresh better me ! _____________________ November 18, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Reveries Copyright Protected, ID 11-1305-783-18 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Juxtaposition sponsor, Silent One, Judged 11/25/20 Second Place
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Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 10:56 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Juxtaposition contest, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Anne-Lise thanks so much for the congratulations and HUGS _Constance
Y. Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 10:29 AM
Hi BW, Good take on the contest theme. Congratulations on your win. Have a Happy Thanksgiving:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:48 AM
Alexis, thanks for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
Evans Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations, Constance. Such a beautiful poem.
La France Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:48 AM
Marilene, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful _Constance
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 7:25 AM
Nice contrast between the past and present..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
La France Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:49 AM
Silent, thanks for another great contest and for my placement, appreciate _Constance
Krutsinger Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 5:52 PM
“The present is a brand new day” this is profoundly wise. Signed, Old Poet.
La France Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Caren (old poet) thanks for visiting my poem _Constance
Jayasankar Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 6:04 AM
This is so amazing.. Constance. The last three lines so Beautiful...and straight from heart. 'New me is different'.... so true. Best wishes in the contest dear friend. Love n hugs ~ Ani :)
La France Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:29 AM
Ani, thank you for visiting my poem and for the compliment _Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:41 PM
Hello Constance, I like this poem. I like the 1st verse. I also like the last two verses. enjoy your evening my friend.
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November 19, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Hello Constance, this is a lovely poem you created. Enjoy your day my friend.
La France Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 5:22 AM
Darlene, thanks for the compliment, I like those verse too _Constance
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