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Reverie of Limerence Premiere Contest Winner

Laying beside the falling path Drunken senses, broken love Monsters inside of me Running wild.... Ocean of tears Unspoken fears Left me in pieces While they left in peace...... He crossed my path then Like a butterfly His touch so gentle... Love so pure.,... Gleam of hope over a shady life..... Waking a new feeling A new rush Bubbling infatuation..... Those orbs shining Under the moonlight Those sinful lips Mould in a scarlet kiss so passionate and sweet..... High on your amorous Sensation so overwhelming.... My eyes blinded with love Amaranthine.......... His smile bright as Sunshine Lit a firework in me Intertwined hands locked for eternity Cross my heart to never let go.. The Devil he is Maniac of Mind Cares who? I am the he gets down to The flame of his rage, a wildfire Burns me with desire and more As the light cloaks the darkness He waves a farewell to night The ghost of him fades Lost in the spell of yours I crave for you Where are you, Mi Amor? A forever spent.... In the reverie Of my Limerence.....

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Date: 6/20/2017 10:06:00 PM
Wow... its just awsm.... loving it so much!!
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:21:00 AM
A beautiful write Jeevika.
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 5/2/2017 9:36:00 AM
thank you
Date: 4/28/2017 3:33:00 PM
Great write !! Congrats on your win :)
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/28/2017 10:39:00 PM
Thank you sir.
Date: 4/27/2017 10:45:00 AM
Lovely work, congratulations Jeevika...
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/27/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thank you so much sir
Date: 4/27/2017 6:39:00 AM
Greetings, Jeevika. Congrats for your well-deserved first placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/27/2017 11:26:00 PM
Thank you sir for your appreciation. I'm humbled.
Date: 4/26/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thanks for dropping this on in the contest and welcome to the soup...
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/27/2017 11:28:00 PM
your welcome sir. Thank you again for holding such contests. :-)
Date: 4/11/2017 12:58:00 AM
Such a beautiful, sad and longing poem you wrote here... About a lost love. Welcome to PoetrySoup with this first great write.
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/27/2017 11:29:00 PM
Thank you sir. you're appreciation means a lot
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2017 10:53:00 PM
s1 did good here!

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