Premiere Contest WinnerReverie of Limerence

Laying beside the falling path
Drunken senses, broken love
Monsters inside of me
Running wild....
Ocean of tears
Unspoken fears
Left me in pieces
While they left in peace......
He crossed my path then
Like a butterfly 
His touch so gentle...
Love so pure.,...
Gleam of hope over a shady life.....
Waking a new feeling
A new rush
Bubbling infatuation.....
Those orbs shining
Under the moonlight
Those sinful lips
Mould in a scarlet kiss
so passionate and sweet.....
High on your amorous
Sensation so overwhelming....
My eyes blinded with love
Amaranthine..........
His smile bright as Sunshine
Lit a firework in me
Intertwined hands locked for eternity
Cross my heart to never let go..
The Devil he is
Maniac of Mind
Cares who?
I am the he gets down to
The flame of his rage, a wildfire
Burns me with desire and more
As the light cloaks the darkness
He waves a farewell to night
The ghost of him fades
Lost in the spell of yours 
I crave for you
Where are you, Mi Amor?
A forever spent....
In the reverie Of my Limerence.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Motwani Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Wow... its just awsm.... loving it so much!!
Inman Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 9:21 AM
A beautiful write Jeevika.
Rani Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 9:36 AM
thank you
Schwartz Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Great write !! Congrats on your win :)
Rani Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Thank you sir.
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 10:45 AM
Lovely work, congratulations Jeevika...
Rani Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Thank you so much sir
Kimathi Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Greetings, Jeevika. Congrats for your well-deserved first placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
Rani Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 11:26 PM
Thank you sir for your appreciation. I'm humbled.
Lawless Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Thanks for dropping this on in the contest and welcome to the soup...
Rani Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 11:28 PM
your welcome sir. Thank you again for holding such contests. :-)
White Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 12:58 AM
Such a beautiful, sad and longing poem you wrote here... About a lost love. Welcome to PoetrySoup with this first great write.
Rani Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 11:29 PM
Thank you sir. you're appreciation means a lot
Vaso Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 10:53 PM
s1 did good here!
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