Reverie of Limerence Premiere Contest Winner

Laying beside the falling path
Drunken senses, broken love
Monsters inside of me
Running wild....
Ocean of tears
Unspoken fears
Left me in pieces
While they left in peace......
He crossed my path then
Like a butterfly 
His touch so gentle...
Love so pure.,...
Gleam of hope over a shady life.....
Waking a new feeling
A new rush
Bubbling infatuation.....
Those orbs shining
Under the moonlight
Those sinful lips
Mould in a scarlet kiss
so passionate and sweet.....
High on your amorous
Sensation so overwhelming....
My eyes blinded with love
Amaranthine..........
His smile bright as Sunshine
Lit a firework in me
Intertwined hands locked for eternity
Cross my heart to never let go..
The Devil he is
Maniac of Mind
Cares who?
I am the he gets down to
The flame of his rage, a wildfire
Burns me with desire and more
As the light cloaks the darkness
He waves a farewell to night
The ghost of him fades
Lost in the spell of yours 
I crave for you
Where are you, Mi Amor?
A forever spent....
In the reverie Of my Limerence.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/20/2017 10:06:00 PM
Wow... its just awsm.... loving it so much!!
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:21:00 AM
A beautiful write Jeevika.
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 5/2/2017 9:36:00 AM
thank you
Date: 4/28/2017 3:33:00 PM
Great write !! Congrats on your win :)
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/28/2017 10:39:00 PM
Thank you sir.
Date: 4/27/2017 10:45:00 AM
Lovely work, congratulations Jeevika...
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/27/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thank you so much sir
Date: 4/27/2017 6:39:00 AM
Greetings, Jeevika. Congrats for your well-deserved first placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/27/2017 11:26:00 PM
Thank you sir for your appreciation. I'm humbled.
Date: 4/26/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thanks for dropping this on in the contest and welcome to the soup...
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/27/2017 11:28:00 PM
your welcome sir. Thank you again for holding such contests. :-)
Date: 4/11/2017 12:58:00 AM
Such a beautiful, sad and longing poem you wrote here... About a lost love. Welcome to PoetrySoup with this first great write.
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Jeevika Rani
Date: 4/27/2017 11:29:00 PM
Thank you sir. you're appreciation means a lot
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2017 10:53:00 PM
s1 did good here!
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