Reverie

Red thoughts racing like maroon heart Eyes embracing goal far as yellow star Violets growing lakeside in paisley park Embracing natural brown beauty to start Rosey bush with thorns that hook Indeed just a design for protection Emerald energetic leaves look for dreams suggestion

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/16/2024 12:21:00 PM

Karen, what a colorful reverie of the rainbow in beauty! Enjoyed each creative line. Blessings to you!

Karen Jones
Date: 8/16/2024 1:05:00 PM

Happy you enjoyed reading Sam.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2024 1:09:00 AM

Such a colorful reverie. Loved maroon heart and Paisley park

Karen Jones
Date: 8/16/2024 1:49:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2024 1:29:00 PM

What a wonderful Acrostic write. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Karen Jones
Date: 8/14/2024 3:39:00 PM

Thanks poetess!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/13/2024 2:18:00 AM

Hues and blooms intermingle in this delightful acrostic. Hugs.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/13/2024 4:55:00 AM

Thanks

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/12/2024 7:11:00 AM

Karen, you capture the beauty all around us including an explanation of what might appear less attractive to some. Nice to think spiritually in color. Smiles

Karen Jones
Date: 8/12/2024 9:32:00 AM

Thanks