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Reverberations of Insomnia

Moonbeams reflect off the water’s edge Reminding me that starlight reaches down To caress my skin with a sense of regret Knowing how the longing for contentment Keeps me buried beneath sheets and quilts ~ Whispers of silence collect within my spirit These are the moments that are dreaded Flickers of gleaming rays bend to touch me Keeping me within their grasp, like an echo Forever sending back sentiments of restlessness ~ Anxious thoughts drift in and out of my conscious Revealing soft ideas that promise to accept me In spite of all the reasons my mind keeps exposing For there are times like this when every thought Brings with it ~ colors of ebony nightmares resonating Sleepless - Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire Written and Posted on June 13, 2020
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. I love it. Enjoy your win and day............
Agustin Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 3:24 AM
Congratulations. With the peace of the Lord, we can vanquish sleepless nights. God bless you.
Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 2:48 AM
I love how your poems are always soothing, delightful and adorned with your gorgeous use of imagery and love dear Gina! I will read it every time I can't sleep. Congratulations on your win :)
May Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 8:04 PM
"Anxious thoughts drift in and out of my conscious revealing soft ideas that promise to accept me", Very nicely penned Gina, Congrats on your win..
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Some people never have any problems sleeping. All my children do not know what it feels like and I envy them so when I can’t sleep at night. Or I wake after one hour and then can not return to sleep. You describe insomnia in such a beautiful unique way in this winning poem Gina. Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:13 PM
What wonderful imagery you have here, Regina. (The way you describe trying to sleep is what many of us encounter each night.) Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Makama Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 7:30 AM
This is brilliant. I feel blessed coming across this page. You have it in you, I will definitely come visiting again to enjoy the blessing of your deep mind. A great piece!
Mukherjee Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 3:09 PM
This is such a genuine heartfelt piece of poetry. It should be a great entry for the competition. All the best, with love Jhinuk.
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