Reveling In the Stars

delight in the giggle of a star girl apparition
black holes dance in constellation's face
madness personified brings mysticism to life
I stare at rhinestone sparkles in awe
wondering when night fairies will appear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:21 PM
Vivid imagination so well expressed in these five lines. I believe you could write another stanza and the fairies would be in it!
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August 13, 2021 at 10:36 AM
You know, my only problem with the contests on AP are that they are so restrictive...prompts, line-limits, requirements, etc. I like to roam free and write what I feel like writing. I think you are pretty much that way, too, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 5:55 AM
I could have, but this was for a contest and I was line-limited.
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