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Reveling In the Stars

delight in the giggle of a star girl apparition black holes dance in constellation's face madness personified brings mysticism to life I stare at rhinestone sparkles in awe wondering when night fairies will appear

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/12/2021 8:21:00 PM

Vivid imagination so well expressed in these five lines. I believe you could write another stanza and the fairies would be in it!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/13/2021 10:36:00 AM

You know, my only problem with the contests on AP are that they are so restrictive...prompts, line-limits, requirements, etc. I like to roam free and write what I feel like writing. I think you are pretty much that way, too, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/13/2021 5:55:00 AM

I could have, but this was for a contest and I was line-limited.