Revelations As Stars Fall

poking and prodding
you pushed,
till limits had no meaning


all this you did, 
with a comprehension
that I was found,
but thought I was still wanting 


beyond our stage,
there was a deeper measure
being poured


I saw as the cup 
consumed,
but could never see 
what was poured,
my curiosity blinded me 
I had gotten too close
to your mystery


even when we fought 
I loathed every clash 


it was when your pain 
became mine,
and exasperation
called my name,
that my first revelation 
revealed itself to me


our roles had reversed,
and were acted out
in the theater of life


I was your doppelganger
in all but sight,
my tongue curled 
around vowels that mimicked you 
but when I checked my cup
it was ever empty


when your final call
drifted across the ground,
and eternity was late,
I finally realized all along
you had tried to show me


it was I, 
who filled your vessel


my cup now runs over
and I can never thank you


this was our last revelation 


~~~~~


You brought me into a world,
of mystery and wonder
in imagination 


you sheltered a child
when all others turned away,
always growling 
at glances of derision 


you gave me the gift 
of knowledge,
so that now, when I use it?


I make you immortal
and within each stoke pressed
I illuminate the page with my love, 
it now reflects, to bewitch the stars
they sway and rain down 
on my gift for you.


never forgotten  
and ever blessed 
my revelations shall continue 
until … 



I have written you a galaxy of tributes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/12/2010 11:19:00 AM
Hi Jayne, This is a lovely tribute. One that expresses the feelings of many children...when they grow up. Very nice writing. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/4/2010 9:38:00 AM
wonderful wonderful verse fine tribute!! Soup Mail
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