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Revelation of a Stalker

REVELATION OF A STALKER my daughter brought her stalker date i watched him closely...my eyes penetrate like a bloodhound, my nose to heels he feels my presence in the revolving door he’d call when she wasn’t home just to hear my voice upon the phone i told her to make it very clear to cut him loose without a tear he tried to penetrate her heart to fill the chambers with goosebump art with saran wrap clarity a mama knows she follows each precarious footfall he crept into our night with his stalker coat the leather long, foreboding weaponry a stalker tells his tale straight up “Some people are scared of me” with a heart of gold, my daughter hearkened to this mother’s knowledge of good and evil we stomped out the fire, until it was cold removed the ash, buried it, eyes shut tight 11/10/2017 Silent One’s Stalker Contest

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Date: 11/25/2017 8:26:00 AM
Impressive piece, Kim - I especially enjoyed the final stanza. Congrats on your win! All the best, John.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2017 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 11/18/2017 5:38:00 PM
Such a well-written poem, Kim, Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2017 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Sandra! xx
Date: 11/18/2017 4:53:00 AM
Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Kim ... blessings! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Greg! :)
Date: 11/17/2017 2:04:00 PM
Scary revelations, a mother will always protect her children.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Silent! :)
Date: 11/10/2017 7:48:00 AM
- Not one mother in law's dream, Kim :) - Great written, luck in the contest - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 8:05:00 AM
For certain! Thanks so much! Blessings, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/10/2017 7:47:00 AM
Wow Kim; your a good Mom for having seen the red flags! A very good write for the contest; good luck in it!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 8:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Cheryl! xx
Date: 11/10/2017 7:23:00 AM
Creepy guy--well done, Kim--love the ending--best for a win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! She actually met him on a movie set. He was an extra playing a football player. Thankfully he lived about an hour away. Have to nip these things before they become a wild fire!

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