Revelation of a Stalker

REVELATION OF A STALKER

my daughter brought her stalker date
i watched him closely...my eyes penetrate
like a bloodhound, my nose to heels
he feels my presence in the revolving door

he’d call when she wasn’t home
just to hear my voice upon the phone
i told her to make it very clear
to cut him loose without a tear

he tried to penetrate her heart
to fill the chambers with goosebump art
with saran wrap clarity a mama knows
she follows each precarious footfall

he crept into our night with his stalker coat
the leather long, foreboding weaponry
a stalker tells his tale straight up
“Some people are scared of me”

with a heart of gold, my daughter hearkened
to this mother’s knowledge of good and evil
we stomped out the fire, until it was cold
removed the ash, buried it, eyes shut tight

11/10/2017
Silent One’s Stalker Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Michaels Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Impressive piece, Kim - I especially enjoyed the final stanza. Congrats on your win! All the best, John.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 3:37 PM
Thank you, John!
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Such a well-written poem, Kim, Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, sweet Sandra! xx
Barden Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:53 AM
Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Kim ... blessings! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Thank you, Greg! :)
One Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Scary revelations, a mother will always protect her children.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:29 PM
Thanks so much Silent! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 7:48 AM
- Not one mother in law's dream, Kim :) - Great written, luck in the contest - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 8:05 AM
For certain! Thanks so much! Blessings, Anne-Lise!
Hoffman Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 7:47 AM
Wow Kim; your a good Mom for having seen the red flags! A very good write for the contest; good luck in it!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Thanks so much, Cheryl! xx
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Creepy guy--well done, Kim--love the ending--best for a win!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Thank you, Vijay! She actually met him on a movie set. He was an extra playing a football player. Thankfully he lived about an hour away. Have to nip these things before they become a wild fire!
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