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What more have we to write about? Waters rippling from thrown stones? And what of passion or true love Found only through lasting pain. The aches suffered throughout the times Will surface forevermore, Relentless to our fighting urge To suppress the burn once more. Stabbing at our beating hearts A strike merely meant to wound So as to heal, so as to learn From the pasts we live within, Trapped like a mouse inside a maze Which has no exit nor light; A lonely soul left to wander 'round 'Til it finds a wall to sob near. What more have we to write of, You ask? No, what more have we to see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/8/2013 7:17:00 PM
Cameron, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2013 5:23:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Cameron ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2013 6:14:00 PM
Cameron, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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