Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Cinquain

Revelation

From far
A voice surges
That speaks to the heart
It wants to reach and be heard
Closer.

Silence's
Necessary
To keep away the noises
Confusion, the mercenary's
Query.

Listen
And come to know
The soul of each season
That wishes to speak to our soul
Their goal.

Open
The ears to hear
The words that are spoken
Parents, Their love revealed in each
Season.

And see
Melt away night
Our fears, our tears and sneers
With the wine of Their love's pure light
God's might. 

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 11.27.10

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Michelle Mac Donald March 8, 2011 at 5:56 AM Hi Carolyn. A wonderful collection of connecting thoughts. What I have gleaned from this is the pureness of children...I does feel as though they "Melt away night" Thank you for sharing, Mikki

Robert Pettit February 15, 2011 at 8:39 PM Each of these verses collectively conveys great descriptiveness. It looks like you missed typing the "S" key on your keyboard when you entered "emerge" in the second line of the first verse.

Carolyn Devonshire February 7, 2011 at 10:11 AM Caroline, just wanted you to know how much I miss reading your poetry. Hope you are doing well in your new home. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop December 30, 2010 at 9:10 AM Un poème puissant et si profond et vrai, Caroline! Tous les meilleurs ... Gert

Sara Kendrick December 23, 2010 at 5:41 PM Those seasons be it of life or of nature are wonderful to enjoy..I am glad that I stopped by to read this one this eve..It was a delight to read..Your comments on my work lifted my spirits this eve..Sara

Daniel Cheeseman December 23, 2010 at 10:33 AM Profound write, so enjoyed, you and close ones have a great festive celebration

Carolyn Devonshire November 29, 2010 at 2:22 AM A very inspiring write, Caroline! We have to keep our hearts and our ears open to hear words that allow us to share God's light. It's so nice to see you posting again. I know you've been busy lately and it's a joy to read your work again. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta November 27, 2010 at 2:01 PM Thanks for your comments on the divorce poem. It's just a view I have in mind to express wit in humor. Sorry, if I have hurt your feelings unknowingly