Revelation

Flat is my world
as the sun passes by
each day
inspite of all Copernicus
had to say.
Perception deceptions precede
the paranormal state
while souls traveling light years
in a parallel universe
gather in the air to stare.
My head snaps
looking into emptiness
while the hair on the back
of my neck ruffles
in response to those watching.
We are connected
as the atoms of our being
swirl through galaxies.
Atoms that appear in an OBE or NDE,
as UFO, ESP, PSI while 
the CIA and the DOD hope to keep
all "discoveries" to themselves.
The cover-up of the coming
of the commonplace is
like a dog who has always known
when their owner is coming home.
We already know ... more will be revealed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/27/2010 7:32:00 PM
So wonderful to hear from u Sue ..hope all is well and u will return soon.. thankxxx for your special comment on my poetry.. looking forward to reading more of your "beauties".. just posted a new blog on the soup site problems last night.. site went down for hours ... thankxxx for your support ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/26/2010 8:46:00 AM
~~Magnificent~~ writing Sue. Been awhile since I seen a post from you. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration my friend. Love, Carol (Soupy mail dear)
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Date: 2/26/2010 6:36:00 AM
Sue, you are a real spooky gal! Me too! I've always thought that aliens are from another plane of existence, which explains the time involved in getting to our galaxy. Are there other planes of existence? Of course! The great Masters visit them frequently, but don't talk a great deal about it. Great poem. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 2/25/2010 7:19:00 PM
Luv all your references to the different dimensions in the galaxies and the revelation that will be coming eventually.. great write Sue with much to ponder.. thought provoking words.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/25/2010 4:38:00 PM
Yes, indeed, we do know things have been hidden. What a great poem, Sue. I love the references to the paranormal abilities and experiences. Daver Austin would LOVE this, too. I'm going to suggest he read it! Love, Carolyn
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