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Revealing Shades of Red

red, beautiful motion;
silent poetry wakes
her hidden desires



Date of Publishing: 02/03/2015

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Connie Marcum Wong

July 28, 2017 at 1:32 PM

Outstanding Teddy! Congratulations on your placement! : )

Teddy Kimathi

July 31, 2017 at 8:57 AM

Hi Connie. Thank you so much for your warm applause! *^_^*

Beautiful Scars

July 28, 2017 at 7:03 AM

Wow teddy, so much said in this haiku. Thank you

Teddy Kimathi

July 31, 2017 at 8:56 AM

Welcome, Laura! :) Thank you for your kind comment! *^_^*

Casarah Nance

March 11, 2015 at 5:40 PM

OOHH I love it!!! :) grats on your win!

Teddy Kimathi

March 12, 2015 at 2:58 AM

Thanks Casarah! ^_^

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 9, 2015 at 9:57 PM

A passionate write of poetic motion...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Teddy Kimathi

March 10, 2015 at 9:45 AM

Thank you Rhonda! ^_^

Skat A

March 8, 2015 at 6:19 PM

TEDDY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Teddy Kimathi

March 9, 2015 at 3:11 AM

THANK YOU so much Skat! ^_^

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2015 at 11:57 AM

Teddy, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi

March 9, 2015 at 3:06 AM

Thank you for your applause Linda! ^_^ One Love, Teddy.

Jan Allison

March 7, 2015 at 2:53 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Teddy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi

March 9, 2015 at 3:05 AM

Thank you so much for passing by to applaud me Jan! ^_^

Maverick Nyambu

March 7, 2015 at 11:03 AM

Splendid Teddy!!

Teddy Kimathi

March 9, 2015 at 12:48 AM

Thank you Maverick! ;-)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

March 7, 2015 at 6:00 AM

Great haiku Teddy...Congrats..love

Teddy Kimathi

March 7, 2015 at 7:54 AM

Thank you very much Rajat! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

March 6, 2015 at 11:50 PM

I REALLY like this one. But your syllables were irregular, as if you were doing a traditional haiku with the count being off on lines one and two. No matter, it was a beauty to me. Congrats for your win in my contest.

Teddy Kimathi

March 7, 2015 at 5:54 AM

Thank you very much for your applause Andrea! ^_^ I will work on my syllable counts in my future haikus.