Reveal Secrets

potatoes
watching with their many eyes
reveal secrets


for charles henderson's haiku vs senyru contest
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Radke Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Oh, this is good! Incredible subject to choose for the contest. And it works incredibly well! Congratulations. Best wishes. Deb
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations Jimmy, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 10:22 PM
this one gets MY award for clever!! Congratulations with your big win, Jimmy!
Roberts Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 5:22 PM
fantastic haiku Jimmy , congrats on your win in the contest
Guzzi Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 2:40 PM
I bet they would too, lots of deep thought goes on when peeling a BIG pile of potatoes! I remember lots of talk with my Gran & Mom Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 10:21 AM
what a delight! CONGRATS in the big, win. jimmy!! :) hugggs, nette
Freeman Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on #4, becoming quite a hand at writing these Haiku. Smile. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 9:14 AM
What a witty haiku, Jimmy! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Calhoun Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Hi Jimmy - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC
Richards Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 8:19 AM
ahh....I remember this clever poem!! Hooray for you!!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 6:41 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your fourth place win in the haiku vs. senryu contest... awesome win luv..
Boyd Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 7:05 AM
You must be talking about wikileaks.
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Hey, this is ALSO a great contest entry! ME LIKES!
Freeman Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 9:17 AM
Great idea, Jimmy. Good luck in the contest. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 4:27 AM
I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Jimmy. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Oh wow....this one is so clever !!! Wish I had though of it...well done, Jimmy !!
Wilson Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 1:57 PM
how clever but now I'm scared of my potatoes lol...good luck in the contest! love,Deb
Haick Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Very witty Haiku, JAM.. Best of luck in Charles's "Haiku/Senryu" Contest. Love, Annalise
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