Rev Elation

sprint to the finish 
     the good times are the fastest

             born to burn rubber 




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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 5/27/2021 5:34:00 AM

Very smart, dear poet, keep burning rubbers, you are born to do that

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/10/2021 10:03:00 PM

Alright. Alright. Rev elation << that’s a little too clever (even for you). The English language isn’t static .... it’s meant to be played with, bent, (maybe even broken occasionally to make way for some needed changes). Ride on, Maureen. Ride on.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/12/2021 7:09:00 AM

Tee hee, thank you! I put out a poetry zine a few years ago titled “rev elation”, it was mostly courier poems. Back to the universe’s way, words just jump on my muse and decide to play. Rubber side down! xomo

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/8/2021 8:21:00 PM

Funny, funny.Maureen Pangie xx

P.S. Awtry

Date: 3/7/2021 1:50:00 AM

I agree with Jeff--the title is a fantastic poem by itself! This is a powerful write.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 3/6/2021 3:56:00 PM

Another wonder of poetry Maureen. From you I learned about titles, but I can never compare mine to yours. A wonderful separation of a word. This title in itself is a fantastic poem!!! I once saw a t-shirt for runners of races. It's blank on the front. The back reads: If You Are Reading This: I'M NOT LAST. Jajaja, especially to be worn by a big bellied man like myself. Always a pleasure Maureen.

Marcela Proust

Date: 3/6/2021 3:38:00 PM

You must be a motorcycle mama. I love this. Thanks.