Returned Love

I've been awake but I was sleeping
Remained alive but I was still
And any happiness worth keeping
I couldn't easily fulfill

I was surviving but was drowning
My heart was beating but stayed back
Whatever joy that I was feeling
Was almost always under attack

I've eaten but I was hungry
Was independent but wasn't whole
Alone I handled what was needed
Tried to stay warm, but I was cold

MY life was filled with hills and valleys
I went through many ups and downs
But when I needed the one to rally
My special someone was not around

The person that I most required
Was living a completely different life
And what I mostly would desire
I couldn't make it come alive

When you came back, my heart re-started
And I began to come alive
And ever since, I've known the meaning
Of a fulfilling, joyful life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on your placement with this write!
Perlin Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thank you so much. This poem is personal and it means a lot to me!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 10:47 PM
A great read Alona, a little emotional trip, lovely penning :) xomo
Perlin Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Thank you so much! I'm a glad the emotions came through.
Wanter Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:35 PM
I really enjoyed this. A "different" love poem.
Perlin Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Thank you so much! It means so much to me!! :)
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