Joyce Johnson Poet Verse

Returned Heart

It would be nice if loving hearts
Were made of much stronger stuff,
With easier to replace parts,
When they have been treated rough.

I thought my cared for heart was tough
And that he would treat it nice.
Because he didn't care enough
My broken heart paid the price.

By: Joyce Johnson

For contest "Hutain This One"       Won an 8th place

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Robin Davis May 11, 2014 at 10:59 PM Joyce This is such a sad and heartbreaking poem. Love should never hurt or feel bad. Thank you for the great comment on my My Past poem.

Sunflower Poetess August 8, 2011 at 8:16 PM Congrats Joyce on your win in this contest, and thanks for your kind comment on my poem. Love~Glenna

Lee Ramage August 4, 2011 at 8:48 PM Beautiful and sad poem. Maybe instead of feeling like he did not care enough, you should look at it that maybe you cared too much, for a heart as sensitive of yours deserves the best. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2011 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Joyce

Jack Horne August 4, 2011 at 11:46 AM Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 9:29 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2011 at 11:53 PM Joyce, I love your broken heart theme that you used in this contest. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi August 3, 2011 at 8:14 PM This made sense! I enjoyed it ;) Congrad's hon Light & Love

S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 3, 2011 at 7:51 PM Congratulations on your win, sensible among the lot..jag

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 5:45 PM Congrats Joyce on an exciting win in Hutain contest with these amazing lines my friend.. wonderful as always luv..

Caryl Ramsdale August 3, 2011 at 3:35 PM Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta July 24, 2011 at 6:10 PM Nicely done this form with touchy write, Joyce

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2011 at 3:33 PM Good luck in the contest with this one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Most everyone has at least one broken heart in a lifetime...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire July 24, 2011 at 2:04 PM Dear Joyce, I love your Hutain and hope it isn't based on a personal experience. Your sweet heart deserves to be treated tenderly. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2011 at 11:15 AM great way to do the hutain, Joyce. I have to try this form out!! HOw are you today, dear lady?

Elizabeth Wesley July 24, 2011 at 12:29 AM A sensitive verse on a broken heart. Beautifully said.