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Return To the Womb

Down in to the darkness deep Slowly and delicately I now edge In to the warmth so cold and bleak In to the womb I once resided In the mother I’d idolized Wondering what did happen Wondering what had changed What had caused such death? To cause such pain? Still slowly moving, sneaking, I started faintly weeping Why would we cause this? Why did we not see? Still I inch, well tears did fall Till a light I did spy Till a sprig I now cradle Now I see, as I gently stop my deplore, My mother will forgive All the hurt, The hate, All the people that did denounce, All she has provided All that she cherishes Yet she now grants; Redemption Forgiveness Unconditional love All in the loud roar Of spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 8:28:00 PM
RAYNE, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:36:00 AM
A mix of sadness, nature and virtue...this is creativity! It's great to read your piece this morning Rayne, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. PoetrySoup is a pleasant platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke
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Date: 6/18/2013 12:49:00 AM
thanks. and i will try
Date: 6/6/2013 11:54:00 AM
Rayne. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/6/2013 8:21:00 AM
What a lovely depiction of the pain of a birthing process--human and nature. Great write. Welcome to P/Soup
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Date: 6/6/2013 1:26:00 AM
- A well written poem - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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