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ingesting poison from an open wound
lethargic rambles in another dimension
death is not the end its merely and ending
hopeless and serene the paths converge
words tumble out of slashed mouths
fingertips burn into the synapses
i return to poetry with a stream of conscience
pyramids destroyed by ravaged boundaries.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 27, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Powerful poem leaving the reader with much to ponder. Good strong verbs to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing! Karen
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March 15, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Awesome , I'm a fan of stream of consciousness writing. It's like tapping into a hidden dimension from a dream and just running with it, no matter how bizarre and abnormal the imagery may be. thanks for sharing.
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March 12, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Lots of depth Daniel in your lines so beautifully worded.. luv your last two lines especially ...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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March 11, 2010 at 10:25 PM
Deep poem Daniel..indeed deep..excellent--Charma
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