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Return To Me

Return to me oh fickle son
while your mother weeps

search on for call of the Jay
though elusive Cardinal sleeps

the roads took me back
to voiced memory fair

though flesh substance lack
red ribbons of flowing hair

I a begger have not an ounce
for those unwitting palms

yet rule of law denounce
except in whispered psalms

love fulfilled in child's smiling treasure
all sins forgiven, each in equal measure
                                  
                                           
epilogue
~~~She was only three, when he, at eighty-three, breathed his last... the joy of new beginnings now forever linked to an unknown yet precious past~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ligon Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 11:03 PM
Beautiful. A fav.
Theraven Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 8:39 PM
Thank you Juliet. -Richard
Callus Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 1:07 PM
The parable of the Prodigal Son comes to mind, Richard. Welcoming and forgiving may seem hard to many, but blessed are those who can achieve both. ~ Regards // paul
Theraven Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 8:24 AM
Paul, Thanks for that comment. Seeking absolution from the past. Not so easy when the years fade away. A kindred spirit perhaps, knowing the days you lived to see. -Richard
Sands Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 7:09 AM
This is beautifully written. I felt like I was on a walk in nature as well with quiet reflection :)
Theraven Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Hello Heidi, Thanks for the comment. It's been a strange year. Hard to find the way home, harder still to leave it behind. I wish you the best in the final weeks of 2020. Tis the season... -Richard
Zahid Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 8:19 PM
Loved the message. Great write
Theraven Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 9:46 PM
Paghunda, Thank you for the comment. I'm glad that our paths crossed in a solumn moment. Time makes itself known to those who share in this life. You said the words so well in your poem "We Live". -Richard
Buhagiar Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:04 PM
Like the prodigal parable, coming back for forgiveness, Lovely nature scene. ~~
Theraven Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 4:19 PM
Victor, Thanks for this comment. Like the portrait painting of Dorian Gray nature tries to restore the views from our past. -Richard
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December 4, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Thank you Michelle. Searched for something lost down a lonely road. And to my surprise..met some new friends along the way. -Richard
Faulkner Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 12:13 PM
So poignant, love the jay/cardinal stanza the best, beautiful message of return and foregiveness~
Theraven Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:22 PM
Happy Valentine's Day Michelle.
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