Retrospective Phrasis Part 5 Recited
COMMONPLACE V
A feeling od desperation,fleeting impressions
a never ending quest susceptible to misfortune
sounds hanging in the air akin to a
tempest conspire to frustrate.The ignited
by the most mundanr,ideas appear in
the mind,intangible,seemingly from
nowhere.A phoenix risen from the
ashes brings to light the oral to the
aural,adds value by mouth to ear.
Surreal ,perhaps romantic,a feeling
of contentment of being there at
the point of soft promise,of this
I never tire.This struggle,truth filled
by words mortality living in verse
to radiate into the reader’s eye& ear.
From Retrospective a commonplace book 2009
Listen to me recite this part phrasis on youtube under my pen name ichthys chiro
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