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Retrospective Ilumination

Sparks fly from water.
This cauldron boils forever!
Fire, water does mix.


For "guiding light" contest

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Daver Austin

July 15, 2015 at 1:33 PM

A description of inner fire I would guess. If not, illuminate. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Skat A

July 13, 2015 at 12:49 AM

JOHN, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 23, 2010 at 6:39 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest JT. Love, Carol

John Freeman

April 22, 2010 at 6:24 PM

Cngratulations john on a fine poem and your success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses

Kim M

April 22, 2010 at 2:09 PM

I appreciate your words "sparks fly from water" to cleverly describe the spewing and splattering water, as in a boiling pot over fire. Congratulations on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 22, 2010 at 2:03 PM

Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest... amazing words and a perfect portrait with your words of the photo.. enjoy ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 22, 2010 at 1:52 PM

Thankxxx John for your sweet comments on my entry and Raul is also an artist and I am quite certain he has lots of access to paintings and portraits and some might even be his own but I don't know for sure... lets give our Haiku entries positive vibes for his contest... luv.. "Sweetheart"

April 22, 2010 at 1:35 PM

The vivid imagery works well in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen