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Retrospective

our words evaporate upon the wind- unremembered by thee and me- letters languish in drawers..forgotten- art ,pictured diurnal.. we see

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Sharon Winter

Date: 1/28/2009 8:04:00 AM

Such a beautiful and yes, sad write. We can only hope it is not completely true. Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/28/2009 6:21:00 AM

Brian, this lyric is absolutely beautiful to read. Its flow is lsoft and sweet. Though sad "pictured diurnal" is a lovely phrase. Love, Robin

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/28/2009 2:49:00 AM

Oh no, this breaks my heart. You have put the very act of my heart within a dusty forgotten drawer. Your breaking my heart Brian! lol This is so sad, but very real, we can only hope our words live on somehow...love, Kristin