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''Retrograde Wind''

Listen to the wind,as it speaks gods' command.Feels cold as it blows through my hair.Look at the sand as it drifts by at a fast paced cyclone.The smell of vapor,as the storm approaches.Wind carries cautious concern.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/5/2011 6:00:00 AM
So RIPE! Now the form is free verse and they line layout needs to be re done..soup mail![thanks so much for the sweet comment on Black Jack]
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:21:00 PM
Wind can be COOL!! So whose car did you hit then. heeheehee
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Date: 3/3/2011 11:13:00 AM
Very descriptive lines that you have penned..Enjoyed...Your presence at my work was so upliftlying..Sara
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Date: 3/3/2011 8:26:00 AM
I dig it.
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