''Retrograde Wind''

Listen to the wind,as it speaks gods' command.Feels cold as it blows through my hair.Look
at the sand as it drifts by at a fast paced cyclone.The smell of vapor,as the storm
approaches.Wind carries cautious concern.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 6:00 AM
So RIPE! Now the form is free verse and they line layout needs to be re done..soup mail![thanks so much for the sweet comment on Black Jack]
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 11:21 PM
Wind can be COOL!! So whose car did you hit then. heeheehee
Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Very descriptive lines that you have penned..Enjoyed...Your presence at my work was so upliftlying..Sara
Greenlee Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 8:26 AM
I dig it.
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