Retribution

Alone I entered the room.
Something wasn’t right.
The patio door was open.
There he was, hiding in the corner.
That was the last straw.
He’d been bothering me
and my family all week.
We were all afraid of him.

As I cautiously approached him
he went for me. Trying to evade
him I fell and cut my head 
on the edge of the radiator.

Finally I managed to get the better
of him, striking him hard with
my right hand. Then I angrily
launched into him.
Didn’t know I had it in me.
After a few moments
It was all over.
he was gone. I had killed him!

I managed to get him off the floor
and carried him outside,
dumping him behind the trees 
at the bottom of the garden.

I was pleased to be rid of him
before the family came back home.
Later I stood looking down the garden
through the kitchen window 
to where he was. I felt a bit guilty
but was somehow relieved.
I had always hated Wasps!
At least that’s one less to bother us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/20/2020 5:56:00 PM
Hello Tim Kitchen, i hate the wasps and bees. They bother me in the summer months. I try to avoid them. Which is not easy. Have a nice evening my friend. Be safe.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2020 5:39:00 PM
Hello Tim kitchen, you are more comfortable around bee's than wasp! I am nervous around both of them. Enjoy your evening my fiend, Be safe.
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Tim Kitchen
Date: 4/21/2020 4:37:00 AM
Thank you, must admit I am a lot more comfortable around bees than wasps.
Date: 4/20/2020 3:22:00 PM
Oh, not me. I catch and release. I feed them on the porch, it makes the guys a lil nervous. ;) Enjoyed your poem! xomo
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Tim Kitchen
Date: 4/21/2020 4:36:00 AM
Thank you, I do normally try to get them out of the house and release them, but not on this occasion!
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