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Retreating after a Routine Bust

how absurd…an owl, wearing a night cap…the fowl an audience howl owl downs his liquor his entertainment slicker audience snicker in midst, a jeerer a foul audience nearer here comes the sheerer this owl on huge bough seriously satisfied resting one big eye trees have been silenced feathers like Autumn leaves float owl is on retreat owl dreams as bough shakes he’s trying out sick routine laughing to himself

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Date: 3/11/2024 5:53:00 PM
Interesting perspective of an owl's perspective- and maybe some of yours? - loved this
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Paige Hind
Date: 3/11/2024 8:03:00 PM
Ah, got it- thanks, Big Hugs :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2024 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! See Gershon comment.
Date: 3/11/2024 2:25:00 AM
Perfect Senryu. Loved them all. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2024 12:01:00 PM
Thank you! For a contest :) Hugs ~ K8m
Date: 3/7/2024 8:30:00 PM
This owl certainly IS 'a howl.' He's capped off my night with a guffaw. Thanks, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2024 1:48:00 PM
This poem inspired by my husband’s comment on a commercial where an owl was dressed up. My husband said: Do people still wear night caps? Thank you, Gershon! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 3/7/2024 5:51:00 PM
Wow you managed to figure this one out. It looks difficult to me. Well done. It is an enjoyable read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2024 1:49:00 PM
Had an idea and ran with it. Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 3/7/2024 4:55:00 PM
pretty hilarious...trying out sick routine = pricless! Well done, Kim. hugs Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2024 1:49:00 PM
So glad you liked that line! LOL! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 3/7/2024 2:11:00 PM
Kim, I'm taking the title literally and trying to follow along the various phases of behavior. Too funny. The things people get into OMG!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2024 1:51:00 PM
Fun to see how you followed the logic of title and poem! I so appreciate you! Titles are not always easy…sometimes they are harder than the poem (for me). Thank you, Duke!

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