Jay Narain Poet Verse

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Retreat on a serene island

Quiet island breeze, palms sway, 
gently swing, waves kiss shores, 
Seagulls soar around, paradise restores, 
Clouds dance, island dreams unfold, 
Serene island, tranquil sanctuary awaits 

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Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2024 at 8:27 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Wish I was there... Have a great day writing away.................

Joseph May July 18, 2024 at 5:40 AM Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned

Valsa George July 17, 2024 at 11:26 PM Congratulations dear friend on your first place win.

Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2024 at 5:18 PM Oh when we are in its midst but still we are usually tourists, not the workers. Love the imagery! Congrats!

Valsa George July 14, 2024 at 7:48 PM Lovely description quite in keeping with the image. Indeed a place of peace and serenity. All the Best !

Darlene De Beaulieu July 13, 2024 at 12:02 PM Hello Jay Narain, this poem seems to be peaceful. A place to relax. Enjoy your weekend. My friend. /Darlene/

Daisy Meadows July 13, 2024 at 11:18 AM A lovely poem and picture. Well done.

Paula Goldsmith July 13, 2024 at 11:16 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful island write. "Good Luck" Looks like we are on the same island/write. I love this picture. Wish I was there for real.  Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................